Sunday, May 16, 2010

Love Story!!!

As in every love story, it revolves around two persons a teenage boy and a same age girl. I never want to name them, and this story lack emotions.

To The story...


The boy was in his way out of the teen, was having a fabulous life with his six brothers and two sisters. They all lived together in a remote village. He is the eldest son in the family. He goes to school, which is near the town and was doing his 11th standard. On going to school he has to cross one of his relations’ (aunty) home.


One day his aunty asked him to accompany her in home as some portion of her house is being rented to someone and they’re on their way to the home. So he stayed there and finally a aged couple came as tenants.


Soon after their granddaughter came there to stay with that aged couple as she discontinued her studies. The boy for some reason came to his aunty house and saw the girl over there. He felt something on seeing her which he couldn’t explain and started towards his home without meeting his aunty. He exclaim as Love at first sight.


Days later ….


He came again this time his intention was to see her and talk to her. As he wished he saw her with his aunty and both exchanged smiles as they’re being given intro. He had a brief chat with the girl and a longer one with his aunty and returned home.



He started to come weekly once to the house. As days rolled the frequency of his meeting increased and the chat got briefer with his aunty and increased with the girl. He used to come during the recess times he got in his institution and started to meet her again and again and again.



They started to move around the village and have daylong chats and leave the place. He used to bunk his classes to meet her. The days were fabulous once again this time the feelings were different. They know they love each other but never said or never proposed. Things were going as beautiful as it would be.



Their relationship were strong but not long enough due to the very old aunt. She started to doubt the boy for his more frequent meetings. She heard about their meetings outside from the forth person and warned the boy for his activities. But they never showed any hesitation in meeting each other.



One day the girl didn’t turn up to the common meeting place (a tree near the big well) of the duo. When he went to the house he found the girls’ house locked up. When asked his aunty about it she told that they have moved to some other place. But he later came to know that his aunty have forced the aged couple to vacate the house. The boy never saw the girl again and nor did she.



Maybe the boy would have lived a happy ever life by marrying his love. But don’t know whether I would have got a loving father like him. I’m sure he was happier than that.



This was my Dad’s love experience which he shared it with me years back, probably the first real love story I heard.


LOVE STORY 1970

3 comments:

shankar said...

The story "Narration" waz ridiculous.. couldn understand in many places..

Rajaguru said...

I'm noob in writing da..........still working on it

Geetha Balu said...

Smile s de outcome after readin dis post:) Good:)